life is

Life is like the rain

always flowing

always going

a begining

and

an end

so peaceful and tranqual

hopeing it will

NEVER

END

Reviews

[Rin]

I kind of like how the poem is shaped like an arrow pointing down. It kind of makes me think of how rain always drops down but never goes up.

[~The Queen~]

This is a good piece. I liked the connection to life and the rain because I, personally, love to sing in the rain (and I love the movie ^^) so reading it a positive point of view was a relieving change. I hope to see more of your work come out, maybe even some stories, as you have potencial. Keep up the good work.

-QueenofKings

[Rhine Wolf]

Awww man the was so GOOD!! the comparison between life and rain is creative you have made me look at rain in totally new light. Truly thank you!!

Blessed be!
Fallon