Daybreak

Daybreak

A Poem by phantom

So early in the morning

And yet we met again

The shadows are yet to fade

those bloody good shadows

And yet we've met again

So why are we fighting so early in the morn

Lets take a break

Lets put our weapons down

And listen to the morning sound

Lets take a rest so we can be our best

When we smite each other to the ground

On this bloody glorious day

© 2008 phantom


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phantom
I hope u enjoy it.

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I love your word artistary. It paints a wonderful picture.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Ooo yes I like this one! "Lets take a rest so we can be our best" loved this line!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow. I loved that!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is ambiguous in a really pleasing way - I like that about it. Well done Phantom!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 8, 2008

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