The Doll

The Doll

A Story by phantomcristal
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Once there was a little girl who was very happy. One day at supper she asked for a doll.
    “Do you love me” the doll asked as blood ran from its eyes and mouth. The girl was playing with her Barbie dolls, one Barbie had an axe and another was on the block. The Barbie raised his axe and it fell. the dolls head snapped off blood pooled where the head was.
    The Girl was asleep and the moon fell upon her face.She opened her eyes and got out of bed taking a knife from under her pillow.
She went to her parents room and slit there thoughts “well done my child come, come to me Fiona” the doll said. She walked toward the  window and … was never seen again.
    “Jack be nimble Jack be quick Jack jump over the candle stick” the doll said. Six years later the girl’s body was found on a river bank, blood ran from her eyes and mouth. Static sounded from a tv. The static stopped and the doll’s mouth appeared on screen “Jack be nimble Jack be quick - a flash of the girl laying on the river bank showed on the screen for a seconded - Jack jump over the candle stick” the doll said. The girl’s eyes opened and she got up …
    Jack be nimble Jack be quick Jack jump over the candle stick.

© 2014 phantomcristal


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is it scary or is it not? do say.

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Umm ... Creeparific ? If I'm using the term correctly. It's certainly a carnival of carnage. Probably best read around Halloween.

A few grammar errors, "slit there thoughts" - "slit their throats"
As for Jack, I bet he must have a hot seat by now. :)

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Umm ... Creeparific ? If I'm using the term correctly. It's certainly a carnival of carnage. Probably best read around Halloween.

A few grammar errors, "slit there thoughts" - "slit their throats"
As for Jack, I bet he must have a hot seat by now. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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phantomcristal
phantomcristal

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i am 15 and female but some people may say i am weird i love to write and watch anime, fantasy is my genre.and unless you beg me all the time I probably won't finish any started books. more..

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