Yet Another Hybrid Theory

When there’s nothin’ else to boast of

They rant ‘bout BE-ing the glorious legit children

Poor idiots know not

That there’s none but us hybrids

In this blistering blizzard of a planet--

‘Cause light never courts light

And dark never courts dark

They the eternal paramours, we the bastardly babes

Clowning before them majesties

The Drunkards of Olympus.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

the blend called man

Reviews

[Cole Hayley]

The title is brillant, the peice matches.

[Frieda P]

Abstract, the mixture of elements in this is intriguing. Interesting. I like it, but have to think on it some more.

[Bluefire]

This is has to be one of my favorite poems on this sight. I love the word choice and the picture it conveys in my mind of another world on a desolate planet. Yet it speaks of humans well and everything they so choose on earth.
Well done!

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I wonder what you were thinking of? I mean, I see the words but there's something hiding behind them that is probably necessary to understanding the gist of this. Please consider filling in the blanks at some point. Interesting write though. :)

[Transience]

thanks for the honest review ufo. you are absolutely right.the gaps get bridged in my perception and i seriously dont know how to lift up the veil for the reader.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T. Serrat]

Hmm, that is curious and thank you for sharing. I wonder, if you were to take only the words that are most important to you and "play" with them again; what might fall out? Well, think about it. Perhaps you'll discover something useful. :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Cause light never courts light
And dark never courts dark...........really...classic lines..very nice poem

[Transience]

thanks.......