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A Poem by Fabricio Hersoguenrath
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A poem about find himself.

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A sadness never felt before took his soul. He grabbed the gun and aimed at his temple. 
Now all the life run into his head. Some cold took his body. 
He remembered the first kiss. 
The first bike crash. 
The summer camp. 
He remembered when life had a purpose. 
His heart beat faster. 
And he pulled the trigger.
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© 2014 Fabricio Hersoguenrath


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Such a powerful subject! Your writing is so magnificently constructed.


Posted 10 Years Ago


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Fabricio Hersoguenrath

10 Years Ago

Thanks for review. I appreciate it.
A very strong opening line. You captured a very powerful experience with just a few words. I liked the parts about the summer camp, first bike crash, and first kiss. It really gives contrast to pulling the trigger.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on March 8, 2014
Last Updated on March 8, 2014
Tags: sadness, kiss, soul, gun, heart, life

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Fabricio Hersoguenrath
Fabricio Hersoguenrath

Timburi, São Paulo, Brazil



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Lover of reading and writing. My favorite writers are Agatha Christie, Chuck Palahniuk, Fiódor Dostoievski, Lawrence Block, Harlan Coben. more..

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