Princess

My Dad disowned me

Your princess is born on an october Day

Your princess is going to be okay

Your Princess  is a preemie

Your princess leaves you beaming

Your princess slips away 

Your Princess turns blue one day

Your princess is in a fight

Your princess makes it thru the night

Your princess can't walk

Your Princess  can't talk

Your Princess tries to communicate

Your Princess develops late

Your Princess has a hero

Your Princess needs your help, she'll get zero

Your Princess believes what you say 

Your Princess still thinks when you're home, she'll be okay

Your princess has highs and lows

Your Princess, to you, no longer glows

Your princess is now silent

Your princess is sometimes aggressive and violent

Your Princess now hates you

Your Princess is no longer your glue

Your Princess is no longer your princess

Why?  Take a good guess

You think your princess left...Nope

You left your princess...How does she cope??

She's Now a diva

See ya!

Reviews

[Aura]

This makes me think that the "princess" has been given up on by her "prince". In this case its her father. There was probably a falling out, or a life altering moment for the princess, for which the prince just gave up on the relationship and left. But now the princess has more confidence, her self esteem has grown, she's no longer a waiting princess, she's a powerful Diva, who probably may not have forgiven her father but she is done waiting around Excellently written, I enjoyed it!

[Jenni Bailey]

Thank you! This poem is not about waiting for my prince tho., it is about my relationship w my dad!

[Chris Shaw]

This Princess has grown in strength and that is a triumph. She can make it on her own. Nicely conveyed lines Jenni.

Chris

[Jenni Bailey]

Thankyou. You are kind

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I love this poem of empowerment. Spoken with clarity and purpose. One can really feel these words and their message. Excellent work Jenni. Thank you for sharing your art with us.

[Jenni Bailey]

Thank you I love going deep w my words...I hate simple in my poems

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

As long as you express from your heart the words you wish to say they will have value and worth in others. Never doubt in your creativity as well as express it. Whether deep in contemplation or even simple. If the message resonates with even one heart it is a success. Keep on writing Jenni and sharing your art with the world.

[Jenni Bailey]

You're so sweet. Thankyou, and I will