Stocked On

Knees

Eyes

Locked on a metal fence

Rip through

Tongue

Swollen with wanting

Arch enjoys desire

Digging deep 

Pulsing, bursting, madness

Bright fire

Cherry coals

Churning, Pulling, Tugging, Clenching

Rolling, Twisting. Sleek

Black spikes above 

Digging into flesh 

Leave. Stay. Leave.

Showered nails 

Red trails

Laughing, slurping

Gasping 

A cold breeze.

Repeat.

Author's Note

Please ignore grammar and punctuation

Reviews

[r. f. jordan]

imagistic, raw, sensually driven. once the "black spikes" wind up "above my neck" the apparently definitive sexual intensity i experienced as reader, billows until the last two lines refresh the experience. try removing all examples of "my" from the first seven lines, and see if you agree that the piece becomes bolder. either way, this is well done work.

[PL Fremmie]

Makes a world of difference. TY. I enjoy the changes and couldn't agree more Obi Wan.

[riskrapper]

wow
did i just get laid?
good stuff

[PL Fremmie]

LOL Jmac! Need a cig? Thx for reading... xo