rocks

rocks are sitting,

no, theyre standing,

wait, theyre laying.

what are all those dumb rocks doing?

they do their thing

unaware, unknowing

i have eyes so i can see

the way they sit there doing nothing.

Reviews

[Through the Gateway]

An interesting and philophical piece. A simple observation of the fact that no matter what we say...rocks do what rocks do.

[Michael X]

wow, it's sincerely philosophical in subtlety. i like where you take the reader here.