The SandcastleA Story by PeteMy first short story."Happy birthday Donald, my king" she whispered softly, leaning over to plant a warm kiss on his cheek. His eyes fluttered open and a broad smile creased his face. "Thank you my Queen" He sat up and adjusted his fluffy pillows. "So what would you like to do today to celebrate your 80th Birthday?" Edna asked him. "You know Edna", He said, with a twinkle in his eye, " I'd very much like to go to Wembury Bay, where we first met". So that's what they did, in a sense. Donald closed his eyes, and after a few moments said 'I'm so glad my father took me to the beach that day...' Donald was perched over a rock pool, feet firmly planted on two adjacent rocks. Armed with his trusty net and bucket, he squinted against the sun seeking out his quarry. He spotted something, and slowly inched his net to the surface, but the creature quickly shuffled sideways under the safety of one of the rocks. He stood up, wiped his brow and looked over once more at the pretty girl playing in the sand. She had faint freckles across her small nose and cheeks, long ringlets of dark hair resting on her pink sun burnt shoulders. The tip of her tongue poked out and her eyebrows furrowed in concentration. The pretty girl hadn't looked his way even once. She patted the top of the upturned bucket with her plastic spade and carefully slid it upwards. Revealing the final piece of her grand sandcastle. Edna clapped her sandy hands together in triumph. "Look mummy, look what I made!" With her head turned away to seek her mother's approval, she didn't see the big boy stroll past and deliberately step through her precious creation. She turned back round and took in the ruins. She looked up at the boy walking away, then back down at the broken pile of sand, then she burst in to tears. Observing from the rocks, Donald's heart broke. He clenched his fists and muttered rude words under his breath. The boy was much bigger than him so all he could do was stand there and seethe. Edna had finally stopped crying and her mother wiped away her tears. "come on honey, we'll go and buy you an ice cream" Walking back down the beach with her ice cream melting over her hand she felt a little better but still upset. She looked towards the scene of the crime and saw a skinny boy with ruffled short blonde hair looking at her, beaming. Beside him sat an exact replica of her sand castle. She squealed and broke in to a run towards him. She sat down next to him catching her breath. "Thank you, thank you, thank you" She was ecstatic with joy. She then picked up two small pebbles and carefully placed them on the top of the sandcastle. "That's you and me" she said "The king and Queen". She pecked him gently on the cheek and giggled. The nurse walked in to the hospital ward pushing a trolley full of bottles and small trays. "Time for your pain medication Donald". She handed him some Morphine pills which he dutifully took with a sip of water. Once she had gone, he removed the one he hadn't swallowed, dried it on the bed sheet, then handed it to Edna. "That's the final one" she said. "That will be enough now" She took out a small wooden box from her handbag containing more of the same pills. She held out the box in her frail trembling hand, and looked at her husband. Handsome as the day they had met. He looked back at her, briefly closing his eyes and gave a single nod. She passed them to him one by one until they were all gone. He took her hand. "Still love you Edna". "Still love you Donald. He lay back and closed his eyes. She sat there listening to the slow rasp of his breathing. The hospital room had faded to a pure white now. Nothing else existed beyond this hospital bed. Just her and Donald. When she could no longer hear his breathing she lifted her handbag back to her lap and took out her purse. She opened it and stared down at the contents. What Donald hadn't known was that before coming here today she had carefully divided the pills in two. These were for her. Edna took out the first one, kissed Donald on the cheek one last time, and popped it in her mouth. She blinked out a single tear. "See you soon my King"
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