2011

2011

A Poem by Tim Piotrowicz
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An old compilation of words to describe a moment of my life.

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The thoughts were surrounding his mind in a fevered pitch of screams and cries.

He wanted out, but feared the worst, his family lost and his heart would hurt.

With clenched fists he yelled inside with silent lips he looked like you and I.

But those who knew him prayed and stood along his side.

The choice to wait, the choice to lie, or to tell the truth and want to die.

© 2015 Tim Piotrowicz


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B
I must say that is quite an accurate snapshot of that moment
Very much alive

Cool !!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tim Piotrowicz

7 Years Ago

Was 2011 a rough year for you too then?
B

7 Years Ago

oh it was a b****
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ahh, I can so relate to this. The silent screams of our thoughts with the silent struggling echoes of our hearts... in this struggle my friend, you're not alone...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I enjoy exploring worlds that others create and I love to create worlds of my own. I am a young writer that has a rough past of trauma, fear, doctors, and medicines but is looking forward to a bright.. more..

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