failure, embrace

failure, the most important thing that we should accept

Why is it that someone cannot accept failure?

Being an adult but not at all mature.

You say that we pick on you,

But have you ever reconsidered your faults?

For a long time we have waited for ripe that never came,

Flowers to blossom but never have.

The causes are not only the weather itself but also the farmer,

Whose incompetence allowed the crops to wither,

But in the end only blamed the inevitable weather.

For god's sake grow a pear,

For if not naught can help even our bottomless prayers!

All our words of encouragement for naught,

Your own failure blamed on the ruthless drought.

Where is the responsible and righteous person I have always heard from your mouth?

Or was it only said to let people look up to you and it only weighted as a moth?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[soulesswriter]

nice the poem itself is nice and has a nice rhyme scheam.i think that it real nice and describes most feeling most people have for immature people.i didnt get the last line but dont worry bout it i just probly didnt get explain it plz.but the poems good .ever want me to read anything send me a read reqest.