your role in the fairytale

this is yet another short one i felt like throwing out here

The desolate wolves roam the shallow waters,

Whiles dragons rule the sky

The Pixies and fairies invade our dreams.

Knights and princesses the savior and the saved

If fairytales were real what part would you play ?

Reviews

[Angi]

I would be a pixie for sure! Love this, Peter! Angi~

[Peter H]

thank you very much angi :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Nice piece... it was refreshing. I would have to be, the tortured knight; greatest knight of them all, but has to struggle through his own demons while defending his kingdom and Queen.

[quinfinn]

like lancelot? oh, poor lancelot......so sad, but so noble and chivalrous!!!!

[Peter H]

lol @ quinfin don't troll him so hard man lol

[quinfinn]

oh dear no, i meant that as a compliment to ph...awesome writer!

[Peter H]

yes he is quite good , i like his pieces . he is a poetic hero :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Thank you quin and peter... i appreciate the compliments you two have extended to me. I was not offended by the comparison. i do have a sad soul, but it does yearn to be loved and protect that which it loves. Much like sir Lancelot.

[quinfinn]

did i call it, or did i call it? i am a pretty good judge of character.....

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

You absolutely did.

[quinfinn]

dude! just when the marines think they have cornered the market....there are a few other good men around!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

If i am such a man, i am honored!

[Sheila Kline]

I love the pictures as they make the poem come alive!!! I would want to be Tinker Bell, and flit about and leave fairy dust behind wherever I went.........
This is adorable!!

[Peter H]

why thank you very much lol someone told me it was feminine with the pictures lol

[Sheila Kline]

No way!! It makes it delightful!! Be yourself - post it as you like it!!

[Androglossia]

Nice concept but tricky.

Lemme think.. I'd be the Mad Hatter. I wanna deal with Time.

[Peter H]

thank you so much mrs.m :)

[Androglossia]

My pleasure, Peter!

[quinfinn]

wonderful idea, skillfully done....if i could choose any role in a fairy tale...i would be the author.

[Peter H]

awesome lol i expected something eccentrically ingenious from you

[quinfinn]

i'll settle for relative anonymity.....

[Peter H]

alright how about partially aberrant lol

[quinfinn]

yeh, that's the ticket!

[Rita L. Sev]

Love this! An interesting question, too - well done!

[Peter H]

thank you so much rita :)

[Tree]

Lone wolf, but my second choice would be a lowly knight, maybe dedicating his life to trying to recapture the throne on behalf of the right full and honorable boy King :)

[Peter H]

sounds very gallant diego :P

[Tree]

Recently a friend bought me the first season of Game of Thrones, so now I'm hooked :)

[Peter H]

lol i binged watched that a like two weeks ago and i'm also hooked but it seems like i may need to buy the books because a new season takes an entire year to come out , but the series is easily 9.8 out of 10

[Tree]

No doubt, I was really skeptical. But it is so well made that it can't be ignored. I'm getting season two.

[Infinity Blues]

I'd be the wicked wiitch ;)
I like it, very much. It has a ring to it and the flow was done well.
For a poem with pictures, you have done splendidly.

[Infinity Blues]

P.s, maybe try for a title, as sometimes the untittled poems dont get as muchcattention, if you no what I mean

[Peter H]

i know but i really just didn't know what to call it

[Infinity Blues]

I think the tittle you picked is excellent Peter. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a desolate wolf.

[Peter H]

well they do exist in area's where most people aren't lol

[Sami Khalil]

I love this unique write along with the pics...Well done...:)

[Peter H]

thank you bro :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)