a conflicted life

a conflicted life

A Poem by Peter H
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this is just thrown out here . i don't expect much wow from it :).

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Moments of sadness

Moments of happiness

Moments of love

Moments of hate

A conflicted life that is what we live.

© 2013 Peter H


Author's Note

Peter H
think of it as an aphorism or a agape something like that , i just threw this out their :)

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Pax
Balance, Equilibrium, yin&yang, good&bad, heaven &hell ~ that's how it is and how it goes... we all go through it in one way or another... that's the duality of all things, shapes and form... it's conflicted but both must exist or if not we can't attain oneness of self and oneness of everything around us... that all lies in a balance...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I like it :) very direct

Posted 11 Years Ago


We seem to be at odds with our feelings and it is often difficult to sort them out. We have the moments of sadness, happiness, love and hate which create conflict, but it is up to us to decide which shall rule our feelings - or guide them!
A very insightful write!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

thank you very much mrs.kline your review is most appreciated :)
Everyone else pretty much said it all. Lovely :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

thank you very much and you're right :) but this review still matters to me thank you :)
can't have one end of the spectrum without the other...

there is balance because of it.

and those moments when we feel happy...or feel love..it is more precious because we have undoubtedly felt the other also.

nicely put.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

thanks jacob
an apt summary of life. liked it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

all extremes feed off of each other...we wouldn't know what happiness was, if we've never been sad.

good work

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

the principle of ying and yang my friend once cannot exist without the other and within each other t.. read more
Sirius King

11 Years Ago

very true
I agree...we live a conflicted life...of light and dark..of good and bad...of joy and gloom...of hot and cold.
Nice presentation. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

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Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Ah, oakay. Thanks, Chu!
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

*okay
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Pax
Balance, Equilibrium, yin&yang, good&bad, heaven &hell ~ that's how it is and how it goes... we all go through it in one way or another... that's the duality of all things, shapes and form... it's conflicted but both must exist or if not we can't attain oneness of self and oneness of everything around us... that all lies in a balance...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life is full of intricate moments... it's how we react that determines the end result. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


We're all walking contradictions.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

nothing can be more true :)
Sirius King

11 Years Ago

I AGREE

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Peter H
Peter H

georgetown, 4, Guyana



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hey nice to meet you all . i'm peter i'm just a boy , i'm from guyana .i just wanted a place to share the profound part's of my thoughts more..

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