a conflicted life

a conflicted life

A Poem by Peter H
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this is just thrown out here . i don't expect much wow from it :).

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Moments of sadness

Moments of happiness

Moments of love

Moments of hate

A conflicted life that is what we live.

© 2013 Peter H


Author's Note

Peter H
think of it as an aphorism or a agape something like that , i just threw this out their :)

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Pax
Balance, Equilibrium, yin&yang, good&bad, heaven &hell ~ that's how it is and how it goes... we all go through it in one way or another... that's the duality of all things, shapes and form... it's conflicted but both must exist or if not we can't attain oneness of self and oneness of everything around us... that all lies in a balance...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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unique style and delivery

Posted 10 Years Ago


These are some very true things indeed. Life can be complicated and its our job to find that center of how to uncomplicated things. It looks like yours may be poetry :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
Clockwork

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :-)
Good and bad stuff peter is not confliction but rather fatefulness, the ominous prophecy-momentous consequence-deadly catastrophic-foreordained blues of living. Seeking favor by servile flattery,
forced marriage, child prostitution, the African diamond trade, crack and meth addiction is no
greater self hate than the love of Nazism, symbols of the confederacy, food addictions or going
to Walmart for bargains is to love. What I mean sir is that confliction is in the degree of what is
love and what is hate, or sadness or happiness and not in the results of these absolutes.

nicely written sir.
food for thought.
dana

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

that comment was food for thought thank you very much :)
do you know the Native American story of the two wolves, Peter? The old man teaching his grandson about the 2 wolves inside him; one that is light and loving and peaceful and compassionate and trusting; the other suspicious and dark and mean and spiteful? How they are always fighting each other. The grandson asks, "Which one wins, grandpa?" The old man thinks, and replies, "The one I feed, of course."

I think a lot of conflict is like that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

ah but each living thing has far more than 2 sides to it, don't you see that too? Even the "good" w.. read more
Peter H

11 Years Ago

true ..... but an important fact is that within each of those wolves existed the other wolf it may b.. read more
Marie Anzalone

11 Years Ago

yes... just as within every person you hate is something about yourslef that you hate, and within ev.. read more
Wise words. A conflicted life is exactly what we live at times.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Its all about harmony...and a balance of body mind and soul...sometimes hard to achieve...enjoyed Peter.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

thank you miss rose :)
I have no more to say, Pax said it well. We have the same thought on this write.

You have interesting stuffs here, Peter. I will be back. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

thank you ! bell :)
Belle

11 Years Ago

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Peter H

11 Years Ago

nope but i'll check her out :)
throwing something out there is what it is about...
glad you threw this I find it quite enjoyable
I have not pictured the word conflict in reference to our lives and like the image of it much
thank you for throwing no I mean sharing*)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
Yes,
Great write Peter. Simple but that brings it to impactual. The duality captured in this is true of the nature of all things in existence. for as things are born so they die, and for every beauty there is an inevitable fall from grace. It amazes me how some of the simplest pieces are my favorite, I think it is because I am incapable of short writing with strong impact. Thanks for this Peter, it is really right up my alley friend. Sorry for being away recent world events demanded much of my time.
Sincerely
Christopher
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

don't worry chris you're still my homie :)
unsavable_soul

11 Years Ago

;-)
the last line says everything. We are all under the conflict of one thing or the other, all the time!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peter H

11 Years Ago

:)

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hey nice to meet you all . i'm peter i'm just a boy , i'm from guyana .i just wanted a place to share the profound part's of my thoughts more..

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