reliving the memories

what if we could ?

What if we can relive a memory?

Like a video camera rewinding our two year old birthday parties.

What if we can relive our first love and correct mistakes exclusive to us?

Would we be perfect then?

In this way all misfortune could be avoided right ?

 

But what if misfortune was for the greater good

Why can’t we believe that theirs no meaningless

Misfortune. Everything happens for a reason

Our daily tragedies happen for a reason all

Leading up to an ideal conclusion

So is misfortune really meaningless?

 

So would reliving a memory be best

What if we spent all of our time in one memory?

What if we became memory addicts, addicted to only the good memories

Would bad memories even exist afterwards would balance even exist?

Would this power spell chaos  or utopia ?

 

Author's Note

thoughts on the general idea would be nice

Reviews

[Pax]

this reminds me of too much of a bad thing can be dangerous and too much of a good things then that good thing will lost its value... why relive a on a certain memory when you can create a new much better one ~ why would you correct a mistake by going back instead on learning from it and move on.... the purpose of mistake is to be learned and to accept as you head forward~ our life is never in reverse its always heading forward~ that makes it challenging because life keeps on running...

i find this piece very thought-provoking, i enjoyed it greatly
~100

[Peter H]

thank you pax it was the point i'm happy you liked it , you captured the point of this piece irrefutably .

[Pax]

your most welcome my friend glad to visit your verses...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I know this guy right, who lives on a Caribbean Island and ponders the utility of his memory....sounds familiar?, but seriously, this was really good, an interesting set of queries from you, best

[Peter H]

ah , lol i'm from a Caribbean island but most Caribbean poetry doesn't focus on things like this . lol thank you for the review sheema it was most welcomed