my virus

this is one i wrote when i was seventeen so please pardon its generic and cliche : emo teen theme :)

you're my natural disaster 

the monster in my closet 

the thing i fear the most 

i am rigid with fear at your overwhelming presence .

i feel the melancholy disease you bring with you 

you're an epidemic to my soul .

you invaded my space 

you corrupted my system , the virus 

you planted within me is growing 

you're a disease to men .

go away you incurable pest! .

you've broken me 

this virus has corrupted my morals 

it has destroyed my cognition 

you trojaned my processors 

you crushed my rural village within 

so what is next do i pass you on to the next victim ?

Author's Note

i wrote this , after i found out this young lass was using me and cheating on me lol .

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you might tweak some..but i would save this...the computer analogy is pretty well done...

you might add to that idea..because it is good..and for 17?

quite a mature piece of writing.

[Peter H]

yes , i've always been into writing poetry but i'm nineteen now but i don't think i matured that much since seventeen lol . but as usual i'm super happy you reviewed this i hold your review's in high regard .