the you within you

i felt like simply writing a simple poem :)

deep within you 

there  is a balance that makes you  ,"you".

don't give up on finding yourself within "yourself"

scream to the anti you that "this is not you!"

eradicate the malevolent you 

that seeks to the destroy the benevolent you

stand up and fight the ,"anti yous",  for that is 

the only way to find the you within "you".

Author's Note

hmmmmmm , review away :)

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i believe this is true...and i do feel that the "you" in this case is warranted

i always tell my students to avoid using it...but here it fits...

this reminds me much of The Moody Blues...and some of the expression in their songs about finding the inner "us"!

i quite like this.

[Peter H]

i know it was actually , inspired by something i heard doctor seuss say thank you for commenting your words means a lot to me

[A. H. Pinley]

Too much "you".

[Peter H]

it was meant to be that way