Ghastly morning

 

Ghastly morning  

 

            Dank is the day with sorrow surrounding you,

                        All of the shadows are closing in on you,

Crystals and flowers, dark as my summer skies,

How could I have forgotten, everything dies?

            Gone are the days, when sunlight caress’ed you,

Rest in the earth, my dear, I’ll be joining you.

 

Ghastly morning

           

Is it the same, that I, I keep seeing you?

Same as you were, but darling I’m missing you,

            Gone in the fog, you never will look at me,

                        Lost in your fog, do you know your killing me?

Tumble down dear, escape what is haunting you,

 In your sad fog, is there someone loving you.

 

Ghastly morning

 

Never again, that I will be seeing you,

Eerie is life, how much I’m missing you.

Reviews

[Jinx's Heart]

This poem was well written. It dwells over me thus giving me so many ways to interpret this. I has a very melancholy tone and a sad light upon it. I like it because the tone and feeling is evident, yet it keeps it anonymous enough to make the reader think...at least for me. I like it! I hope you have lots more writings I'll be able to read, because you definitely have a talent. Best wishes in future writings!

[v.a. stein]

One word,

Bravo.