Burning

Burning

A Poem by Persephone

This flame keeps burning

From the inside out

 

It burns when you’re here

It’s worse when you’re not

 

It never stops….

 

I can’t keep playing with fire

© 2013 Persephone


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Hmm...this intrigues me in the internal love realm. I have felt this before. When desire takes over, and nothing else matters. Which in the end goes all wrong hence getting burned if you keep playing with fire. Very nicely done, so deep and full of meaning and undisclosed thoughts. I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persephone

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)



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Interesting, I for one enjoy playing with fire. But I know one day I will get burned. Good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hmm...this intrigues me in the internal love realm. I have felt this before. When desire takes over, and nothing else matters. Which in the end goes all wrong hence getting burned if you keep playing with fire. Very nicely done, so deep and full of meaning and undisclosed thoughts. I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persephone

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Interesting and intriguing. Playing with fire is always a negative experience. Being burned comes with the territory. Very well written. Nice job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persephone

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Great write, very emotional :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persephone

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Good one. I like

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persephone

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)

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Added on January 19, 2013
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A Poem by Persephone