One

One

A Poem by Persephone

One night

That’s all I wanted

 

You tell me “not this one”

 

One kiss

From your lips

 

You say “not now”

 

One touch

From your hand

 

You state “maybe next time”

 

I ask for one thing

From you

 

You walk out the door

© 2013 Persephone


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Sounds like a proper marriage.

Keep at it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persephone

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)
Eloquent.
I can imagine the scene.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persephone

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.:)
Ooch. Talk about being repulsive. Maybe it just wasn't meant to be. Great illustration of how an attraction to someone can sometimes become an emotionally painful experience. Nice job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persephone

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
He's mean

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persephone

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)
What an a*****e

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persephone

11 Years Ago

Ya, definitely a dick move hehe - thanks for reading ricochet :)

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