Life

Challenges

Learning

 

Ever changing

Nothing lasts

 

Beginnings

Endings

 

Happiness

Laughter

 

Sadness

Tears

 

Up all night

Bed at Eight

 

Early Rise

Sleeping in

 

Opened doors

Closed windows

 

Paranoid worry

Careless abandon

 

All things moving

In a hurry

 

Then it’s gone

Author's Note

Just kind of came to me - Thanks for reading :)

Reviews

[Havoc08]

damn I blinked, it's gone...very nice descriptions here, I also like the alternating positive/ negatives. It really paints a picture of two different people maybe growing apart as it happens in life. nicely done, I like it..

Jimmy

[Persephone]

Thank you! I tried something different here :) Im glad you liked it!

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Rat race minus the time for self. Truly an exhaustive exercise that drains life out of us, and you laid it out so refreshingly light in this poem. Wonderful style and theme.

[Persephone]

Thank you for reading!! :)

[Pax]

its like you've enumerate why and what are we doing right now..lol.
great way to express it.

[Persephone]

Thank you!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Like the style still and the use of staccato you work it well and the ending is good!

[Persephone]

Thank you!

[Adam M. Snow]

It's very good, I like it

[Persephone]

Thank you! Im glad you enjoyed it :)

[Adam M. Snow]

You are so very welcome