Friday Night

It’s Friday night

And I’m alone

 

He said he’d be here

But he’s not

 

He spoke of many future plans

He said a lot of things

 

I wanted to believe

I was convinced

 

That I wouldn’t be alone

On this Friday night

Author's Note

A little lonely tonight - thanks for reading :)

Reviews

[JaceMass]

I've been in that same exact boat with both friends and girlfriends. They said they'd come or that they'd call me to pick them up, I ended up watching a movie alone. Lying comes from a forked tongue I always say. It may be partial truth, but in the end it always hurt someone.

[Persephone]

Truth - Being flaky is never a good thing - Thanks for reading :)

[Megara]

it happens,but this really is beautiful.

[Persephone]

Thank you :)

[Megara]

welcome:)

[Kaylor Mason]

Loneliness is hard, but not impossible. Trust me, I know--hang in there.

[Persephone]

Thanks :)

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I love your honesty

[Persephone]

Thanks :)

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

The only thing good about a situation like this is that it can inspire a good poem. I do have to point out the line "He said a lot of things" - well, people do so...guard your heart, but don't become a cynic. ;/ Skeptic is probably okay, but remember there are examples of honest, sincere, and loving people...gems in a landfill, but gems deserve gems like you. ;)

[Persephone]

Yup! lol thanks for reading :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

flows really well an sounds so sad...Men eh? Who can trust em?

[Persephone]

Right?! lol It's amazing to me how dishonesty comes so easily to some people - thanks for reading!

[Dr. Wood ?]

Yeah..dishonesty, I could have been lying through my teeth.....

[Author Rucha Joshi]

I can relate to this very much...
especially having gone through kinda similar thing yesterday...
nice work...

[Persephone]

Thank you!

[Baby Ricochet]

A simple poem about a real life moment. That's awesome. Great job persephone.

[Persephone]

Thank you!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I meant last line!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So sorry you were alone last night. Me too but it leaves you open to creation and possibilities and this poem proves it. I would suggest taking out the last like and then the impact is multiplied by a factor of 100!

[Persephone]

Thanks for the thought and for reading!