This is a clever and amusing tale, told through a skillful selection of sentences. The line length misleads the reader at first, appearing as it does to be a piece of prose. But the carefully-constructed lines and near-flawless rhymes reveal a poem of unique characteristics.
back to read this fun, well crafted work of creativity, perhaps dwell on a few points to ponder,
the sentence wrapping rhyme form form is contemporary, as well as the down to earth title,
you must have grown up in california, is what i artistically see most in this piece, the vibe,
the passionate beat, all has a certain rhythm of ease, i agree, such characteristics, i think
words i loved, acclimated, verbiage, spawning, catylst, escapade, and tylus, and syntax, and
many more uniquely playing words you carefully chose to capitalize each sentence, each
independent thought, adding to the overall structure, the meaning, always a great reread kim,
This is a clever and amusing tale, told through a skillful selection of sentences. The line length misleads the reader at first, appearing as it does to be a piece of prose. But the carefully-constructed lines and near-flawless rhymes reveal a poem of unique characteristics.
kim, your wording is stellar as well as depthfully charged with absolute diction,
regarding the effective clarity and placement for specific rhythm, the rhyme
form is as equally captivating in this regards, passionate, as flowing metaphorical
eloquence, i enjoyed the aspect of reading and studying words, because it defines
a writer's solidarity, "dictionary dude" the imaginative landscape of emotional
knowldge is energetic, the high paced intention is brilliantly defined, you did
a comprehensive job in detailing the anticipations, symbolyzing the abstract
quality, an admixure of emtoions accompanying desire of challenge, loved this! mike
I have 2 lives. The life I live in whatever fiction I'm writing, and the life I live in the real world. The real world holds all males in my home, 2 teenage boys...let me just say, omg dramadramadra.. more..