for your touch

such beautiful eyes

set sweetly these gems glisten under a golden waterfall

painted this doll was in wonder and lust

soft pillow lips on my smooth skin

I pulled her into and onto the posed c**k

she shimmered and whimpered

and fed off my tensed up arms

with glamour on hold we dove into melted bonds

this woman of amazing eyes

you

my woman

heed warnings to the beefy men of green lands

those of toughness and braids

I'll kill for your touch

Reviews

[Cardinal Robin]

I like where this poem is going. In my opinion this is one of those writes that needs more substance after melted bonds. Essentially, the foreplay and middle are good. I want to know where both people go in their passion once they've melted. It will make for better motive as to why we'd kill for her touch.
Love, "with glamour on hold".

[Arielle Ann]

so lovingly you have expressed the crave within!

[Seriana]

I agree with Robin to a point....it seems missing something perhaps after her braids, lol. You're images painted are always so vividly colorful, I cannot help but see it before me. In a sense, it is visual porn, but somehow more personal. I love your writing Periac. :)