this warmth

When we washed ashore so did my disbelief

Etched by the brilliance of your shadow

The faulty eyes of mine 

tching with

heartache

hold me my dear worship

lest we never forget this warmth

 

Reviews

[nostal]

Very sweet, and smug.
Like it.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

sweetly sad and simple... I was touched upon reading such lovely words.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

this is an exquisitely simple poem.. and the font is funky - tho i would put a space between the lines to make it read clearer

gorgeous words as always periac