glitter dawn

under a brumous downpour of diamond cloud shavings

dropped jewels of weightless sparkle

 

so pretty this glittering view

skin shimmers splendour

 

heavy my eyes drift over countless crossfire

a lulled pose

 

brisk morning

I'm parched

brimmed with cracking angst

holier than foul

 

messiah morning draped by dawn's sponge yellowed skyline

pressed boldly herein

 

I agree with the chalky terrain

Sinless

 

such foward steps begin in arupt stutters

a new day awaits

 

beloved by frozen nymphs

that valiantly speckle my nose...

 

 

Reviews

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

gorgeous wordplay...
the opening line catches my imagination right away and brought to mind the jabberwocky poem in alice in wonderland, both in the language and in the surreality

i am pretty sure i reviewed this BEFORE they redid the site but that seems to have disappeared :^ lol

[Seriana]

LOVE the last verse, and I adore the way your present. How I would love to hear you speak some of your writing. I bet it is something to behold.
One thing that really stands out for me with your writing is the more unusual way of arranging words. It's almost like you talk backwards sometimes, and I do the same thing so it catches my attention. Also, your words choices are not standard, and that makes you unique and special. :) Love it Periac!