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A Poem by Periac
"

um well its not about ants

"
maiden in squares
surrounded by lonesome aged wood
alas an effigy perhaps
my words stordy, involved and evolved
my face brillow hived, cold and useless
set you lofty amoung treelines
here you're conquered by some watermarked stroke
 
you're created and shown to me by dotted ,dried, color
canvassed for eternity for noone else to bother
 
 
 
 
 

© 2008 Periac


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. brilliant ... especially the last two lines ...


Posted 14 Years Ago


stordy is rash and without thought...its an old english term...lol

Posted 15 Years Ago


Definitely not ants. Ok, a couple of things....is stordy supposed to be sturdy? And if I'm reading this right, I believe both of the "your" should be you're?
Somehow, the blue font threw me off. I read it in red :)
Nicely done, as usual!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Periac
Periac

Lake Geneva, WI



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