rabbit hop

creeks flow as trickles grow
under a canopy's veil dropping leafy hail
so its here i plant my seed you'll sow
embraced on blades that framed your pose

butterflies dance in a fluttering step
all painted brightly in a summers dress
here a ladybug crawls sweetly on my lap
in strawberry armor and a Zorro mask

we layed as cotton does soft, fluffy and white
like two diamonds in a jewelry store perfected by light

Reviews

[Periac]

the title actually is a description of two people making love like rabbits....;)

[Seriana]

I'm confused with the title as well ;) But the gentle flow of this with your cleverly wrapped messages is breath-taking. I really like the subtle use of rhyme used here. Not too forceful, yet very well put together. Nice Periac. :)

[NightDream]

Great use of imagery and great flow. How does the title fit?
I enjoy the light loving emotion of this piece. Like a warm sunny day in the arms of the one you love it is awe inspiring.