2 Sides...Same coin

here i write the poem twice in 2 ways

how do I convince you my lonesome words are true?
maybe by crying or stuttering on what I'll say to you

aching heart and loss of sleep are symptoms I've endured
by opening up my locked chest and pouring out the mourn

kisses and hugs brings happiness to my cheeks
and a smile from a dove is such a tender treat



whoa
whoa whoa
cut the crap...start over
enough of the sappy wussy stuff



hollow my selfish words cringe
in wanting of woeful acceptance
dropping tears and tonguesto lay a praise upon you

heavy my chest beneath broken breathes
wearliy afloat
here take my secret emotions battered in sorrow

your blessed pressed sex handed me favored warmth
in the
beauty of angelic pose

Reviews

[Seriana]

Wow! 2 sides of the coin, hey? Not sure which side I prefer, they are both fantastic. Beautifully written. Such a talent have you, my friend. :)