Battle of Good and Great

a dilemma

i

in turbulent lustful gazes
weak in faint stress

conjured from philandered cauldrons
ripened with infidelites rooten juice

she of my current skyline
favored and adourned in comfortable beauty
known and tasting of blessings

then her
of new mystery tarts
older wisdom framed and clouded in pretty poms

i

unarmed

lifeless

vegetable

Reviews

[Seriana]

Ouch. Hum....a dilemma indeed. I hope it's not a real one. This reminds me of the adage that the grass is always greener on the other side. I can personally attest to this NOT being accurate. But one never knoweth the truth entirely until their own path they walk.
This is probably one of my most favorite of yours. Heck, I like all of your stuff, but this one has a more humble tone to it. Truly lovely Periac.

[Periac]

hi everyone...thank you all for the responses......just so were are all clear this piece was inspired by a harmless flirting while sitting with my woman.....i just added alot of extras for the sake of a story.....so i am still a good boy

[Adela Muresan]

It's so sad. The poem is very well written , and the presentation of the verses is great, but I don't like the fact that you put yourself in such a low position; even if you do it in such an artistic way.

A.M.