letter

seen
white
lost
whirled
cold
drenched in medieval ink
soft
parched
floating
birdlike
the whole time I sweat like an ocean

pier
broken
wavy
shakey
sinking
cringing
stamped
cramped

"what?...damn no mail on Sunday"

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Reviews

[Dorchadas]

great write Periac... I love the overlapping imagery... how each word has a value of it's own... or it's own individual merit but is connected to the next all the same... you manage to create a lovely visual and the end made me laugh out loud... ~grins~ very good... me loves it ;)

[Seriana]

Hehehehe, oh how do we love our mail....silly mailman.
Periac, you make something simple, so funny and a delightful read. :)