snowflake

a poem for.....

in cotton white here you fall in feather steps.....
these eyes from afar crystalized in a design of purity

softly cold the withery air

had you always worn those frozen tears?

in your mysterious pattern of delicacy
a virgin hue gleaming brilliantly

prayed for you even as last years storm melted away

Reviews

[Legion]

The imagery here is gorgeous. And I despise winter even, but this was great. Love it.

[Seriana]

You JUST wrote that? Dang....it's REALLY good. Such a lovely, touching piece. I like it. ALOT. :) A certain sense of bittersweet longings. :(

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Such a broken and beautiful personification

The sincerity and balance of beauty and sorrow are unmistakable.

Thank you, Periac, for this read :)