winter the new summer

periac dear friend

from over rolling soft mounds of a blueish soft snow

i watch through your gingerbread house at the warm yellow glow

that night when we travelled through prairies and laughed with cold beer

torin his majesty ahead with nothing to fear



came us cool with the breeze and a wrestle to the trees

came us strong in the knees with words for the leaves



i look to you sky

in delight and disdain

cursing the hand that writes words of nonsense and pain

and.... periac... a prince of mumbled crumbled sonnets

create for me an evening

made of giggles and warm rain

Reviews

[Seriana]

"create for me an evening
made of giggles and warm rain"
Sigh....that's very pretty. Poetically innocent, almost. Another great one Periac!

[Kathleen Marie]

Very interesting. You have some nice imagery.

[Misa]

hmm..
to be honest, l didn't get this. l'm not sure if it's cause l'm not up on movies & what not, and simply didn't get the reference, or if l'm missing something else entirely. Anyway, certain lines stuck out as unique - in a good way. ie the ending line, and the "delight and disdain" line. However, aside from the confusion factor, there were a few things that stuck out in a negative way, as well. ie the first line of the last stanza, because no matter how l interpreted it, the only thing l could think of was that itwas suppsoed to be "your."
is it supposed to referring to lord of the rings, by the way? if its' something like that, the confusion problem may be that it's too vague, and jumps from medieval type things - elves & whatnot - to modern day thoughts. interesting write tho, and l'm hoping it'll make more sense later. :)