tale

play a song oh minstril
fiddle oh!
dear harpsy glow

the jester is gone from the throne room
psst.....
the queen's thong seen with the pale moon

alas' an elven awakening
morning glory

"once upon a time"
began this story

float fairy fly
fiddle oh!
dear harpsy glow

Reviews

[Nicholas Hallows]

I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get to reviewing this piece. Life has been a distraction lately.
This is a really interesting piece and reads like it was written centuries before 2008.
The rhythm is very well done and I could hear the minstril's music behind the words.
It seems to have a playful elven cheekiness to it which I liked.
If I had one criticism it would be that I would have liked there to be more of it. But then that's always a good way to leave your reader.
NH

[Lyra H]

Great flow here...