single leaf

the streets began to fill again
without me

where you once paraded adjacent to heaven on silent ceilings
lost we’re my cries as they shook the leaves
autumn losses reflect the sky
dark and cold

i shaved to much hair from my face

i can’t do anything correct

Reviews

[Moonie]

"autumn losses reflect the sky" sits really nkcely on the tongue, and is quite vivid. I love the imagery in this poem, and the thoughtfulness with which you executed each line. In the 3rd last line do you mean " i shaved *too*" ?

[Periac]

i must fix the layout thanks for the pointer
i noticed it didn’t fit as laid out