Daylight

stream-of-consciousness

Moon, why are you in the sky

In the middle of the day?

Sun, why can’t I see you

When it’s bright enough to play

With words

And toy with endless rhymes?

 

Author's Note

Whatever you have to suggest I'll take :)

Reviews

[Emily]

This is a great short piece. Very well done. I love the idea of how these words flow together. THe question of the moon and sun throughout the day are just lovely.

Nice work!

[cest la vie]

I agree with Over the Wall.. this is good as is, but has the ability to really flower..
I love those thoughts that just pop in from no where..

[.]

this could easily grow...abstract thoughts can lead to some wonderfully fun and interesting pieces

[Zakkarias Astrophel]

I sometimes ask myself the same questions....................................