flows well
the action she does like she is really throwing the snowball
heheh
amusing
and yeah y
math of all the subjects heheheh.
will wait for the continuity of this
hurry up
You are a writing genius!!!!! Flow is purely eloquent, tone is very light but reflective and the flashback (at least that's what it seems to be) is really good, it seems to already aid the story!!! I always love your writings!!!!!!!!!!
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