[Contest] Weekly Haiku: Christmas Regret

“Sorry,” you told me,

“didn't get you a present.”

Oops. Merry Christmas.

Reviews

[RAWR!]

hah ^^

[__Flaw__]

:) Nice one. Though i am myself not qualified to review a haiku... its pleasing nonetheless. Have fun :)

[dgf,mhkfhjgf]

Michael,
I believe this is a haiku. Haikus have evolved since their time in Japan, so they don't always have to deal with nature. What defines a haiku is solely the syllable structure.

This one is fun and definitely should have won the Christmas haiku contest Mel.

[Alexander Z. Anthony]

Haha, I like it!
Short, sweet, funny.
Kudos!

[Michael X]

this isn't haiku, it just has the same syllable structure. but it is funny and capturing!