a new kind of friendship

a new kind of friendship

A Poem by Penulis Kecil

gaining security in you and she,

each day i dismantle

a little bit of wall

while she forges our paths,

returns to me things i didn't know

i missed.

 

you

collect, one at a time,

thimblefulls of tears from the rivers,

the lakes, and the oceans.

 

together we will build

a new form of art.

© 2011 Penulis Kecil


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Penulis Kecil
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loved this one, how much we value friendship in our lives but this poem was far more than just about this. Stunning!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Penulis Kecil
Penulis Kecil

Caboolture, Australia



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I'm a 29 year old Australian woman who has, like most people, experienced a number of things in life. I think I'm pretty friendly, if a little odd and silly. When I'm not writing, I enjoy other cre.. more..

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