Opportunity

Experimenting with a form of poetry that requires you to choose a random page of a book and choose words in order, making sure there are no more than two contiguous words.

Opportunity is dangerous:

he believes.

He wants.

 

The spattering across crushed metal,

flared brilliant.

 

Wait.

Research.

 

Destruction seems paradise,

Disease began with this earth.

 

No.

 

I loved. I admired.

I wanted a tear.

 

He betrayed.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

Always of interest when poet's start experimenting. i particularly liked 'The spattering across crushed metal,' -great image, powerful ending too!