Caught

Experimenting with a form of poetry that requires you to choose a random page of a book and choose words in order, making sure there are no more than two contiguous words.

Silk, the waving breeze,

poisonous gossamer thread:

we were a ripple.

Author's Note

All polite/relevant reviews are welcome - especially constructive critique, but also including grammar and spelling corrections. And thank you for reading/leaving a review!

Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

i liked the contrasts - the lightness of the breeze, the gossamer and the ripple and the incongrous 'poison' and the almost haiku structure, gorgeous :)