Sandscape

Going through a lot of change, and having a hard time, I was suddenly assailed with the image of myself trapped inside a giant sandscape.

while i am trapped in here

the ground shifts beneath my feet,

a steady fall

of everything.

 

the sky

tilts.

a heartbeat later,

 

i am on my knees,

blinded, choking,

breathing coloured sand.

 

you watch a while,

dispassionate,

detached,

before you take another jab.

 

the sky

tilts.

a heartbeat later,

 

i slide beneath the shifting sands.

Author's Note

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