Rhyme

Rhyme

A Poem by Penulis Kecil
"

Somebody once told me that only poetry that rhymed was "proper" and that a lack of rhyme showed a poet up as inferior.

"

Tell me your meter and I'll give you a rhyme
you need only ask - I'll match it line by line.

 

I can force out the words and give you what you wish
I can make it all work like a flick and a swish.

 

But where is the art? There's no room for flair!
When you do it that way, there's no magic in there.

 

Poetry's more than you've asked-

it's flair and precision (and art!)

 

Let go of convention, stop forcing a rhyme:

the words beg for freedom - let this be your sign!

© 2011 Penulis Kecil


Author's Note

Penulis Kecil
I wrote this one to both prove that I'm capable of cobbling together a piece that rhymes (albeit very basic rhymes) while staying as true to my own beliefs as I could. Many poems rhyme only because they've been wrestled into it, this one is no different, but at least it admits it!

All polite/relevant reviews are welcome - including constructive critique, grammar and spelling corrections. And thank you for reading/leaving a review! I'd love to hear your thoughts.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

124 Views
Added on July 19, 2011
Last Updated on July 19, 2011

Author

Penulis Kecil
Penulis Kecil

Caboolture, Australia



About
I'm a 29 year old Australian woman who has, like most people, experienced a number of things in life. I think I'm pretty friendly, if a little odd and silly. When I'm not writing, I enjoy other cre.. more..

Writing