I Am Not Your Receptacle

Just something I threw together this afternoon.

I am not your receptacle,

not your Grand Canyon

to feed with the echoes

you hunger for.

 

See me!

 

I wear a three o'clock shadow,

and vodka stained walls

starved of the things

you're asking for.

 

See me! See the person-

I am not your echoing chasm!

 

See me!

You cannot pour juice

from an empty jug.

Author's Note

As always, all polite/relevant reviews are welcome - including constructive critique, grammar and spelling corrections. Finally, thank you for taking the time to read/leave a review!

Reviews

[Lola Nation]

nice transition from feeding echoes to starving ... and again with the echo / to the empty jug - hollow...