depression

depression

A Poem by Penulis Kecil
"

My experience of what depression is.

"
sadness wears me like a coat
(well,
more like
faux fur lining on the edges
on a coat)
like Katie's coat
hid her
in the hospital

my feet hang low
around its knees-
my head? also

and no wonder life
seems muffled

© 2010 Penulis Kecil


Author's Note

Penulis Kecil
Any and all constructive criticism is welcome, but please bear in mind the lack of capitalisation is deliberate. Thank you for taking the time to read and review!

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. sad ... but very beautifully expressed ... so true ...



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Penulis Kecil
Penulis Kecil

Caboolture, Australia



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I'm a 29 year old Australian woman who has, like most people, experienced a number of things in life. I think I'm pretty friendly, if a little odd and silly. When I'm not writing, I enjoy other cre.. more..

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