Miles and Hopes

Hope to meet you soon.

Every increasing mile between us

Only thrusts my hope to be yours soon

 

Every letter we exchange

Only reduces the miles between us

 

Every mile we conquer

Only makes, soon: sooner and hope: Certainty

 

Author's Note

Letter = is a single letter of a word. Medium be the IM, email or the ever loved conventional mail… A letter bridges hearts.

Feel free to correct me :)

Reviews

[Nishant Gupta]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writers/online/

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I like it the way it is...that wonderful excitement of soon meeting that special someone. Hope is what keeps us going.

[Nishant Gupta]

beautifully explained,nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

[Don Shaw]

nice work i like it

[Maryum Mazhar]

Sweet.
You just said so much in a bunch of lines!
Nah, I don't think it needs correction, the poem is actually pretty perfect :)

Thanks for the review.

[Jazz]

Beautifully written! Personal pronouns such as 'us' really gives it an intimate quality. It feels like you've let us into your mind. Thank you for sharing! It's short but sweet and emotion-packed.

[Science girl]

Short but packs emotion! Well done! :)

[Alysa]

This honestly brought tears to my eyes. Very short, yet holds such a strong emotion. I thank you for sharing this.

[Dove]

I think you did a good job on this poem. It's short and sweet.