Unconditional

So I like to linger around the “unreviewed” section of this universe and this has been on the list for forever. I finally gave in to my curiosity and clicked in. I was more than a little shocked to find that it had reviews. I’m guessing this is another glitch of the site since it’s not being maintained. Hopefully a more recent date will allow actually unreviewed things to come to the top since this has actually received feedback.
Unfortunately this is also now blank. I'm assuming it fell victim to the accidental wipeout of the site a decade or so ago. Especially since it shows 400+ views but no reviews but one can scroll down and see multiple reviews.

Posted 1 Month Ago

enjambment makes a beat ... we dance is music ...

Music begins to atrophy when it departs too far from the dance... poetry begins to atrophy when it gets too far from music.
Ezra Pound

Posted 17 Years Ago

this is wonderful. i love the comparison between a poem and your relationship and love for one another. great work.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Nice flow, very romantic and clever comparisons....I enjoyed this very much

Posted 17 Years Ago

very good penny. flowing and emotional.

Posted 17 Years Ago

What a perfect combination these two individuals make Penny Lusk, very sweet dance too. Loved it. Smiling at you, Tai

Posted 17 Years Ago

Wonderful. I really like the flow and the rhyme. The way you compare a poem to a love and a love to a dance creates a nice feeling that I can appreciate. This poem is like a very smooth morning breeze. Easy in, easy out. Very enjoyable.

Posted 17 Years Ago