Glance

Little did I know
Your eyes got me off hand
With each day
I look at you

Cold and deep
Your eyes carry sorrow

But as fierce
As they may seem
I know a loving man
Could be hiding within

If i could just
Turn this glance
In a stare...

Reviews

[spartan101]

I love the last verses. it's really good

so much raw feelings

[S.Fischer]

I really like this simple poem. I think you really capture the thinking of someone vying for the attention of someone else, such a simple act like glancing can carry such weight behind it. A really enjoyable read, lovely.

[notekeeper22]

thanks for the review ^^