Why

just thoughts

I keep wondering at night.

Watching the sky shimmered by the stars.

Does my heart have a knight?

Does love always lead to a bleeding scar?

 

If love leads to trust then,

Why these hearts do fears the touch.

If keeping promises is a safe den

Then, why tears do flow too much.

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

Good, though you should edit. "Does Love always leads to a bleeding scar?" should be "Does love always lead to a bleeding scar?". Your syntax and grammar needs a little work. Still a nice poem though.