To my dearest love

"Sweet love gives an ache..."

Capturing this beautiful scenery of the sea,

There upon clicking the button I see,

a beautiful woman wearing a smile like honey.

My eyes stuck and heart pounds heavy.

 

My knees can't bear to step.

Yet my excitement is at its leap.

So I take a foot of two.

But suddenly I tripped my toe.

 

An open hand there I saw.

I take it and my heart blow.

It's you, pulling me up slowly.

As well as stealing of my heart instantly.

 

We started with teas and coffees.

Sharing each other’s thoughts and memories

The get ups becomes so deeply

along with our feelings passionately.

 

Heart flew in crow

upon sealing the feelings that grow.

This is the sweetest thing that happened.

Living with the one you love 'till the end.

 

I never ask for more.

Being with you is enough to bore.

And I knew time may test the bond

but I swore to strengthen our strand.

 

But oh my love!

Your eyes on mine feel like clove.

Is this sweet words are in drought?

Is there something that make you doubt?

 

Your honey smile is now out glow.

I feel obnoxious to know.

The cause of this dimness

and the coldness of yours, my dearest. 

 

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

A bit confusing at times, but a solid love poem. There are some grammar errors present, but they are not too bad. It needs a quick edit in my opinion.

[pen_and_notes]

Thank you.. hope you could teach me more with this..